I don't know if I actually like how the top panel came out...and the whole page looks weird because I stopped at that...
Oh well, experimentation right? :D
yaaay for fresh starts
Hm, Some comics I see usually block out the city in black with several window looking lights and a slight glow over the town. thats one way or perhaps different shades of greys to highlight a few more features, its kinda dark and distracting for the rest of the page.
I love your art style :3
I actually kind of like how dark it is at the top. It sets a mode, the vibe of a dark night in the park that supports the need to walk him home. I think whats jarring though is that none of these values are in the scenes of them talking. they themselves are a bit too bright for the mood you set above.
Is this comic still updating?
please, it's sooo good. More!!!!
@Boolsajo: Is this comic still active or is it dead?
Thank you very much for the feedback @SkarletFeather and @Silvry!
(AHH this is like...months too late, I'm so sorry, everyone!)
To address other guest readers:
I definitely know it's not fun at all when webcomics don't update for ages, but...I am far, FAR from professional regarding this comic, and updates are, quite literally, sporadic. I started this comic without much thought, as one casual avenue of ~practicing~ but lol...
Anyway, the comic isn't actually dead! I still do want to expand on the characters some more...
I don't know when the next update will be, however. Sorry!
YAY I am SO SO happy this comic isn't dead, I'm already in love with the characters :) take your time, I'll keep checking back for updates!
I'll keep checking until ist updated again *~*
Want to see next page!