I don't know if I actually like how the top panel came out...and the whole page looks weird because I stopped at that...
Oh well, experimentation right? :D
yaaay for fresh starts
Hm, Some comics I see usually block out the city in black with several window looking lights and a slight glow over the town. thats one way or perhaps different shades of greys to highlight a few more features, its kinda dark and distracting for the rest of the page.
I love your art style :3
I actually kind of like how dark it is at the top. It sets a mode, the vibe of a dark night in the park that supports the need to walk him home. I think whats jarring though is that none of these values are in the scenes of them talking. they themselves are a bit too bright for the mood you set above.