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GwtF 007

March 7th, 2012, 12:05 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
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Author's Comments:

Posted by Boolsajo

Pseudo-background wut..!

I feel like I've dragged on this scene.
...I'm no writer, damn it! /crap excuse

PAGE NOTES: I think I'll just be using Korean SFX when I get stuck with English that just doesn't fit/sound right to me. OTL

Again, critique/advice is always welcome! :>

Posted at March 7th, 2012, 5:36 am

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Reader's Comments:

Posted by LeahR95

how could i critique such fabulous work?~


no but seriously, you're stuff's awesome :)

Posted at March 7th, 2012, 1:29 pm

Posted by sekichiku

aiwanmooooaaarrrrr!!! (* A *)

Posted at March 7th, 2012, 1:33 pm

Posted by xmissxspunkyx

LOL I totally saw that coming! :D

The only critique that I have(which is really more like a tip) is to make sure you are letting the readers know what the sound effect means. Like an asterisk that notes that the sound means "slap" or "huf" or what ever the case maybe. :)
The majority of your readers don't know Korean I'm guessing so you should make sure they can understand. I hope i don't sound naggy or annoying! ;.;

Anyways your art is marvelous! I tots love it! SO jealous! >:D

Posted at March 7th, 2012, 9:32 pm

The only thing I have to say critique-wise is I find the setup of the page slightly confusing. I personally thought that the sequence of the panels would be going from the top left and down, then go back to the top right and continue from there. The slant gave me the impression that it wasn't finished there yet, so at first I read it out of order.

But really, this page is amazing with everything else. I've never really gotten over my love for his expressions and I just really love your art style in general <3

Posted at March 8th, 2012, 6:10 pm

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