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June 2nd, 2013, 11:55 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
How do flashbacks work???
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Boolsajo
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Notes and Stuff

An experiment with a flashback scene. Still working on paneling...

PAGE NOTES: "Hyung" is a Korean term that I'll be using quite often, jsyk. While it does mean "elder brother" there is no requirement for blood relatedness. For girls addressing older males, the same meaning comes from the term "oppa" (if you've heard the song Gangnam Style...).



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@MultiPheebs: Thank you! :D
@Forbidden_Requiem: Heh, thanks! I hope this update is another good one!
@Ravens: o///o Thanks! I'm glad the noses and hands got your attention; I do try (a bit) to make them look distinctive and/or decent.. ;)

Posted at June 2nd, 2013, 11:55 pm

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Ravens
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WATCH OUT FOR THE TEXT WALL, HAAAAH~!

Comment virginity, aww yeah. 8DD

Yisss for sexy times~ >7<

I think you did well on the flashbacks! OvO There is a distinct difference between the flashback panels and the regular ones, so well done~

Plus, your paneling rocks!! OuO I'm still trying to figure exactly how the heck paneling works out. >n> I always feel as if my panels are too awkward and don't flow correctly.

(I have yet to scrape up enough confidence to upload my comic on SmackJeeves. VnV What if it sucks and everyone hates it, scream? What if my art is a load of baloney? What if I have no distinct plot?! *hyperventilates*)

Your panels are very well organized and give a clear direction to the story so they are super effective. ^v^ They also have a very beautiful fluidity to them that drags the reader's eyes instinctively. Well done, friend~! <3

The first, second, third, and seventh panels are my favorites. >7<

The first panel is very detailed and well done, you can really see his despair in his position and such. ): The bottles in the background are really nice and you didn't skimp on them at all which is very admirable (because I tend to skimp on backgrounds hUEHUEHUE). 8D

The second and third have dem noses and you know how much I love your noses,hng~ <333 They're so beautiful and graceful and unf. (I'm so sorry for being awkward your art is marvelous)

And the seventh panel is very intimate and sexy. :'D I really love the way they lean into each other, also the hand on his tie coupled with the hands on his hips create a really nice, passionate atmosphere, mmyes.

ALSOOOO, the way you draw eyes are super nice!! They are simple, yet portray a lot of emotion and are extremely beautiful. c:

I really like your art and your comic, sorry for ranting. //sobs

Posted at June 3rd, 2013, 12:29 am

paintedmare
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YAYYY so happy you updated, oh my how I love your beautiful style. The paneling choices on this page work very well, though I'm glad you mentioned it was a flashback or I would have had a little trouble discerning that just from this page alone. Not sure how to suggest any way to make it clearer with your pencilwork style-- I understand the way you've tried to indicate it and it was easy to see once you had made a note of it that it was a flashback. :3

Posted at June 3rd, 2013, 3:52 am

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